The True Maori People

The True Maori people! Created By Arnav, Orlando and Peter

Here is a qr code to watch my video made by Orlando,Arnav and Peter hope you enjoy oh and the link will be in there too. Please leave a comment. C:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fb0FduHILtU

The viewer.should tristan

CAN'T SLEEP!!!!!!

In term 3 we have been reading a book called the viewer  and we got a pic of me trying to sleep  i worked with peter and we had lots of fun so i hope you like it. here is the link:https://www.speakpipe.com/voice-recorder/msg/ifl5ts0uztj5718n
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That Was Camp

That Was Camp.

Remember when i was surfing and i was scared but then i was thinking positive and i was standing up i was really cool i felt so alive. …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….?
Remember…when i was wrong about doubting in my head that could not build a slingshot but when i gave it a go and i got the job done.
………………………………………….........................................................................................................?
That was ___Camp___________________________.

Remember when i said i'm not that strong at shooting a bow and arrow but when the answer became clear  i did
it.
……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….? Remember…………….....................................................................................................................................................?
That was ________Camp______________________.

Remember when i said i'm not that strong at waka armor but when i cleared my mind it was so easy.
…………………………………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………….?
Do you remember…………………...........................................…………………………………………………………………………………….?
That was ___________Camp___________________.

My Super ultra cool facts about Stars!!!

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My Super ultra cool facts about Stars!!!

My Information Report Success Criteria:	Self	Peer
My heading/title:
is an interesting title (I might have phrased the title as a question.)	yes
My opening paragraph/introduction:
says what my report is about in a clear way	yes
gives a general “classification” – and maybe a technical classification	yes
outlines the main features of the subject	yes
My main paragraphs/body paragraphs:
have clear topic sentences  (topic and main point)	yes
are organised so that each paragraph is about a different aspect of the subject
give detailed information (factual descriptions)
include specific, technical vocabulary
are generally balanced (have a similar amount of detail about the different aspects I write about)
may have helpful: tables, pictures and/or diagrams to add information
My end paragraph/conclusion:
draws the report together/sums up my main points
may give a personal opinion; ask the reader a question and/or tell the reader where further information may be found

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                                   Super ultra cool facts about Stars!!!

Begin Writing Here:

[Heading/Title of Information Report]

[Introduction]

Have you ever wonder about stars then this is the writing

you need to see. Stars are little lights that shine in the sky they are helpful for a picnic

or a date with someone you love.There are heaps of stars and they all are different

to all the ones we see in nz AA and SA.

[Paragraph 1 - change this to your second subheading]

Types of stars

There are lots and lots types of stars like a dwarf and a dwarf is the most common star

that heaps and heaps of people know like the sun.The sun is a dwarf star and planets orbit

around the sun but that's not the only thing that surprises me what surprises me is that

the sun which is a star is the closest one to earth and that it's the most hottest star and it

is 92.96 degrees.

[Paragraph 2 - change this to your second subheading]

stars and galaxy

Galaxy contains heaps of stars because if there was no stars then there would be know

galaxy in space and  galaxies hold all the future of what's going to happen in 500 years

because how knows is it the stars that make galaxy that holds the future or is it the

galaxy itself that holds the future?.I hope this writing inspired you to write your own.

[Conclusion]
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My Writing

My ABCYA Word cloud Based on My writing

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My Mars writing ABC word cloud

My Writing About Mars

How to survive the first night in Minecraft

In Week 6 of Term 1 our class focussed on how to write great explanations. We wrote about how to survive your first night in Minecraft (the game a lot of us are obsessed with!).

Here is my writing, after I have self-assessed and peer-assessed my work.

Signs of Success!	Self	Peer
Introduction - briefly tells the reader what the explanation is about	✓
Present tense
Formal Language; Technical Language	✓
Time connectives	✓
Sequenced and paragraphed (paragraphs have 1 main idea!)
Ambitious vocabulary (adjectives; verbs)	✓
Summary - may have an interesting fact or comment about playing the game

I am going to tell you how to survive the first night in minecraft

First you cut down the wood to make a torch and so you can see. Because if you can’t see

then the dark unsatiated fearless zombie will come. and not only that you also need it to make fire a torch and a plank. When you're at that stage when you have to build a house at least two blocks high and you don’t need a roof

on your first night.

After that build a cave or a an underground tunnel in the morning before the sun goes  down don’t wreck it

because the  hideous camouflage bush creeper comes out at night so make a cave with a torch and a

tunnel with light like heaven but you better watch out because there are venomous spider that spawn in the dark.And that's how you survive

the first night in minecraft.`

End Of Year Reflection!

Here is my end of year reflection presentation. Since it almost the end of 2014 we
need to reflect on our learning here is my learning and I hope you enjoy.

Poetry

Hi my name is Orlando and this my poem that I made on Google doc it's called Diamante poem.