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T1 Week 8 Reflection

What?

I learnt how to do complex and compound sentences.

So what?

I learnt how to use a conjunction in a sentence like:The tiger was unsaited

and  hungry so it pounced and devoured the dear.The conjunction was so.

Now what?

now i am going to use complex sentence in my writing.

How to survive the first night in Minecraft

In Week 6 of Term 1 our class focussed on how to write great explanations. We wrote about how to survive your first night in Minecraft (the game a lot of us are obsessed with!).

Here is my writing, after I have self-assessed and peer-assessed my work.

Signs of Success!	Self	Peer
Introduction - briefly tells the reader what the explanation is about	✓
Present tense
Formal Language; Technical Language	✓
Time connectives	✓
Sequenced and paragraphed (paragraphs have 1 main idea!)
Ambitious vocabulary (adjectives; verbs)	✓
Summary - may have an interesting fact or comment about playing the game

I am going to tell you how to survive the first night in minecraft

First you cut down the wood to make a torch and so you can see. Because if you can’t see

then the dark unsatiated fearless zombie will come. and not only that you also need it to make fire a torch and a plank. When you're at that stage when you have to build a house at least two blocks high and you don’t need a roof

on your first night.

After that build a cave or a an underground tunnel in the morning before the sun goes  down don’t wreck it

because the  hideous camouflage bush creeper comes out at night so make a cave with a torch and a

tunnel with light like heaven but you better watch out because there are venomous spider that spawn in the dark.And that's how you survive

the first night in minecraft.`

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End Of Year Reflection!

Here is my end of year reflection presentation. Since it almost the end of 2014 we
need to reflect on our learning here is my learning and I hope you enjoy.

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